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Please guys. Give some feedback. I had a feedback on the other one telling me that the horizontal bar of the sign should be shorter and that I should also write all the text in the sign. Let me know what you think. I will post another one tonight according to the first feedback I got.

the horizontal bar is way too heavy. **with typography, the horizontal strokes are thinner than the vertical strokes to give the impression of visual balance.**work on it a bit more. also, the way the lower serifs do not blend into the baseline keyline, even though they are sitting directly on it, is distracting.

Thanks a lot for your feedback Axl. I will post the modified version tonight. Thanks again.

I think the problem with both of your logos is that the concepts feel very forced - they're trying too hard. If you look through this site you'll find that the majority of the most successful logos are also some of the most simple ones.