Alidocious

by OcularInk • Uploaded: Sep. 10 '08 - Gallerized: Sep. '08

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Description: As in Super Cali Fragi Listic Expi Alidocious. :-) Available on IncSpring with domain name.
As seen on: IncSpring
Status: Just for fun
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Tags: identity symbol mark trademark
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NeilMcDonald Sep. 10 '08

Caught my eye right away, nice one.

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OcularInk Sep. 12 '08

Thanks guys. I still feel like this has a ways to go though. Any constructive feedback on how to improve the design is greatly appreciated. Cheers!

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Type08 Sep. 12 '08

Hello OC, let me throw some ideas then... *1) I think there are 2 many stars?*2) umbrella could be like 20%25 downsized?*3) what if you make the holder of umbrella (stick) of the letter L from the word and leave some space between the holder and the cover?*Whutcha think?

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OcularInk Sep. 12 '08

Alen, thanks man!! That's exactly what I was looking for. Let me try those changes out. Anyone else wanting to break this one down, feel free to chime in as well. Thanks again!

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peterehat Sep. 16 '08

AWESOME! The magic dust brings it all together. Nice.

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Hayes Image Sep. 17 '08

Love it!! It has a very retro feeling about it too...very 50's packaging...nice :)

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Thomas Sep. 19 '08

Excellent work Oc'. Nice and clean.

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OcularInk Sep. 19 '08

Interesting thoughts and ideas. Thanks everyone. :-D

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esotericsean Nov. 16 '08

Nice!**At first glance, I thought the umbrella was tied into the word. Maybe a slightly larger 'a'?

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