Beauty and the Bench

by Koopastomp • Uploaded: Apr. 02 '09

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Description: Logo for a community effort to improve bus stop benches with art work
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Paul Rand Apr. 02 '09

Watch the kerning, especially the EAU on Beauty.*Tighten everything up to read as a unit.

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pourio Apr. 02 '09

ditto with paul. kerning. not sure if i like the font choice or size of the text though.

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Paul Rand Apr. 02 '09

Upper lower and all lower case on %22and the%22*Beauty and the Bench, same point size as you have it.*Tightly kern everything.*Make the bench black and have the ends connect more, touching and shrink it down a bit.

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Paul Rand Apr. 02 '09

In this case is the rainbow representative of the gay community?

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theartistt Apr. 02 '09

I don't see how, the colors aren't in the right order. They barely make a rainbow (last two in wrong order even without the green between). Your not one of those who sees the gay flag in every rainbow are you? Must be your age...

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koopastomp Apr. 02 '09

Thanks for the input, the logo is a pro-bono piece that I put together a little while back for a local effort to have artists paint the bus benches around town. The colors don't have any relation to the gay community. I think that this logo doesn't need to be one color, but if it needs to be used in a one color senario, the design can support it and replicate well. I agree that the type can be kerned tighter, and trying upper/lower case text may improve things as well. Thanks again guys.

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