KAKADU CAFE
by JacekJaniczak • Uploaded: Sep. 27 '16 - Gallerized: Oct. '16
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I think it's too spiky, especially that branch the bird sit on it and the ornament beneath the typo. It looks like barbwire ;) Straight line would be better in my oppinion :) Composition and estethic are marveles!
ReplyI like. I agree the barbs might just be clutter. But more importantly, it's getting a little pinched, especially around the foot, tail feathers, branch.
ReplyI would change the font. And I got rid of the very fine details
ReplyInteresting!
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