by J_Ben_A • Uploaded: Nov. 01 '10
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in a logo class
welcome all critiques
this is my brain dump
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J_Ben_A,*I don't know how this works as a logo. It if completely flat. It might be nicer if you added some dimension to it by making the frog look as if he was jumping out of the circle. Also your type needs some work (it's not even top to bottom) and looks stretched. Lastly, your frog illustration could use some more work, simple but not THAT simple. I think you could do more with color to make the frog pop as well, maybe not have the frog the same color as the outer circle. I hope this helps!
ReplyLove the concept %22Franks Frogs and Reptiles%22 I would have done a reptile eye or a frog eye instead of a actual frog.
ReplyThe type at the top is kinda funny, and maybe looking at the frog from the front might be nice too.
ReplyI like the idea of a frog, but not necessarily a fan of a full illustration. it also lacks dimension, and the type needs some tweaking.
ReplyYour original frog concept looked better. Maybe add some detail to the current one. It seems flat, and your text seems stretched.
Replyperfect.
ReplyThe best advice I can give you is to go back to the sketch pad. Try taking a completely different approach. View the LP gallery for inspiration. Watch things like spacial relationships and curve consistencies. Play with beefier fonts. Keep practicing with the software, my friend. Do 10-20 more variations. Push yourself. It'll pay off in the future.
Replythanks for the advice everyone. I will keep working on this one.
ReplyJ_Ben_A,*I agree 100%25 with fosterbarker! Back to the sketch pad.
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