GVP Space

by HelloUriah • Uploaded: Jul. 03 '08 - Gallerized: Jul. '08

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Description: Film production company; The idea of a film being a space.
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OcularInk Jul. 03 '08

Dude, you really pulled this one together. I just knew this mark had potential from the beginning. It now looks right on and has a sense of style. Something about the type seems off still. Perhaps scaling it down just a bit would help? Coming along nicely...

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hellouriah Jul. 03 '08

Thanks Ocular, I took your advice on the type being to large, and scaled it a touch. Glad you like it.

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bartodell Jul. 03 '08

I think this one is perfect. However I would tighten the lockup of the mark in relation to the text. Other than that it is very well executed.

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hellouriah Jul. 03 '08

Climax: Thanks, that G is hanging on the left I have tightened it up, it feels a tad heavier but looks nicer. **Bart: Could you explain the lockup between in the text and the mark, the V creates an unbalanced center, I will have to keep trying to fix it.**Thanks for everyone suggestions, pond has really helped me with my logos, I'm trying to impress a few lectures at uni with this logo.

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gthobbs Jul. 03 '08

I really like this. Feels timeless.

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firebrand Jul. 03 '08

Me too, it seems to move like an aperture.

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fogra Jul. 03 '08

Very appealing to the eye ()

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hellouriah Jul. 03 '08

Thanks Climax and Bart, sorry, I knew that as leading, not letting but I will remember for future reference. Feels much more together and not as separate elements.

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gthobbs Jul. 03 '08

The word actually is leading. It refers to the days of type set slugs. Lead strips of varying widths would be placed between the lines to separate them.

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hellouriah Jul. 04 '08

Thats ok, oh Froga nice pun. Thanks everyone!

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OcularInk Jul. 04 '08

Looks even better after the updates.

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Muamer Jul. 04 '08

Very nice... So glad you made it!

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hellouriah Jul. 04 '08

smartinup: thanks, about the mark%3B I suppose that could be a problem.*muamuer %26 ocularink: thanks

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yurko Jul. 18 '08

I like it very much!

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