computer mogul
by BrandonBarnard • Uploaded: Jun. 05 '09
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computer shop
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www.agentorange.co.za
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The idea here is not bad, but it us bit translating well. Take 'COMPUTER' out of the globe and fit it above MOGUL (same widths). I would suggest simplifying the globe a little, drop some lines out, then thicken the remaining. Make the globe overall a little smaller and I think it would look good. Oh, and take that weird lite yellow out of the globe. I don't know if you were going for that, but the word 'COMPUTER' in the globe and that weird yellow color in the background gives this a dated feel. Did you want that?
Replythats for the positive feedback will make those chnages and see how it comes out
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