1st version

by AlexWende • Uploaded: Dec. 03 '07 - Gallerized: Dec. '07


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Description: First version of a submission for, an online shop for golf equipment.
Status: Unused proposal
Viewed: 7677
Tags: g k .com coolgolf

Lets Discuss

OcularInk Dec. 03 '07

Hey, that's pretty darn clever.

puffmoike Dec. 03 '07

FWIW I prefer this to your second submission. Purer (if such a word exists)!

duschdas Dec. 04 '07

haha now i see the glasses, that's a kewl idea. I like this version better, the %22mohawky%22 version doesn't make it for me.

AlexWende Dec. 04 '07

Thank u guys, I appreciate your comments! %5E%5E %0D*

firebrand Dec. 05 '07

Nice idea, Alex. Just needs a bit of crafting.

AlexWende Dec. 07 '07

thx firebrand :)%0D*What do u suggest? I thought too it isn't finished yet but don't really know how to aproach..

firebrand Dec. 07 '07

You could tighten up the sunglasses and maybe add simple highlighting. Possibly lowercase type.

kre8ive design studio Dec. 07 '07

Great concept, and as said very clever. I think the glasses or club heads should be relocated somewhere? May be above the typography? Not sure yet, ill have to look at it more.

tweak Dec. 09 '07

Only suggestion I have is that you move the glasses/clubs up a little more, so they don't 'droop' below the type too far. You could even make a rounder 'wood' club shape instead, to resemble glasses more.**Love the concept.

BlueEyedMonster Dec. 12 '07

I hate to say this, but I initially thought it was a bra. I'm not really sure how to overcome that though, because after I looked at it for a bit longer I like the concept. **Perhaps it's just me!

AlexWende Dec. 14 '07

Thx @ all %5E%5E%0D*%0D*@Climax:%0D*Perhaps u confuse it with the final Version of the logo which I also uploaded lately? %0D*

logomotive Dec. 24 '07

yeah Nido, this TOTALLY looks like something you might come up with, and I mean that in the most positive way.

jeffc Jul. 23 '08

I like this quite a bit.**Maybe my mind is just in the gutter today, but what I first glanced at the thumbnail I thought it was a bra or bikini. Judging from Radhacelis' comment above, it looks like I'm not alone.

hindmarshdesign Jul. 24 '08

...maybe you should justy stick to one golf club. All I see is a bra!

AlexWende Jul. 24 '08

Radhacelis: *LOL maybe I should request some woman golf clubs, but I'm not sure that they like the concept very much :D


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