Yellow background is a bit distracting. I feel like making the trunk more solid would give more focus to the %22s%22 in the leaves. I would try without the grass dots. Right now the typeface feels slightly big and tight-might feel different with changes. Hope that helps!
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Yellow background is a bit distracting. I feel like making the trunk more solid would give more focus to the %22s%22 in the leaves. I would try without the grass dots. Right now the typeface feels slightly big and tight-might feel different with changes. Hope that helps!
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