The mark is very good, but it completely dwarfs the type. At the very least I'd set the text in a heavier weight. Also the spacing between the mark and the Half should probably match that between the Half and the Cut.
The mark is fantastic, but the type needs work. Not only is it being %22dwarfed%22 in size, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the heavy, square nature of the mark. Try exploring other typefaces. I think there are a lot out there that could compliment this great mark better than this.
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Replythanks brandcore :)
ReplyThe mark is very good, but it completely dwarfs the type. At the very least I'd set the text in a heavier weight. Also the spacing between the mark and the Half should probably match that between the Half and the Cut.
ReplyThe mark is fantastic, but the type needs work. Not only is it being %22dwarfed%22 in size, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the heavy, square nature of the mark. Try exploring other typefaces. I think there are a lot out there that could compliment this great mark better than this.
Reply*Thanks verymuch friends for your feedback. it will really help me to shape my works in a better way :)
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