I like the overall idea/concept, however, I think your execution needs some refinement. The grass at the base of the %22n%22 is too subtle and gets lost. I would emphasize it more. Also, the tree silhouette is a strange shape and isn't immediately recognizable as a tree at first - at least to me. Finally, I know that you chose blue because of the sky, but green might actually be a better choice because of the name %22natura%22.**And kill that pattern background, it's distracting from your logo.
i agree with sdijock. the concept is solid but some work on the tree's shape and the grass. perhaps lose the grass entirely? also, the up-turned, outward serifs on the big %22n%22 look a bit...sharp.
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I like the overall idea/concept, however, I think your execution needs some refinement. The grass at the base of the %22n%22 is too subtle and gets lost. I would emphasize it more. Also, the tree silhouette is a strange shape and isn't immediately recognizable as a tree at first - at least to me. Finally, I know that you chose blue because of the sky, but green might actually be a better choice because of the name %22natura%22.**And kill that pattern background, it's distracting from your logo.
Replyi agree with sdijock. the concept is solid but some work on the tree's shape and the grass. perhaps lose the grass entirely? also, the up-turned, outward serifs on the big %22n%22 look a bit...sharp.
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