Rebekah Smith

by vastinspiration • Uploaded: Jul. 30 '07 - Gallerized: Aug. '07

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Description: Logo for a child's dress making company. comments / critiques welcome
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sans Jul. 30 '07

It's a nice graphic, but it is a little cluttered for a mark. Seen as a smaller thumbnail (when I clicked it), came across more effective.

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vastinspiration Jul. 31 '07

Again, thanks for your comments sans. I agree with your cluttered comment, however it is very difficult to display it how I would like in the space given. Do you think it would be more effective with the girl isolated?

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firebrand Aug. 01 '07

The symbol is lovely but the birds are overdoing it (imo). Have you tried joining up the type or a more handwritten style?

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vastinspiration Aug. 01 '07

ok guys, i took your advice and simplified things.

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OcularInk Aug. 03 '07

Other than the comments previously made, I think this one feels great. I love the colors too.

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d3design Aug. 03 '07

I love the color scheme. The silhoutte is very clean %26 appealing. This would attract my eye as a mother shopping for clothing.

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vastinspiration Aug. 03 '07

thanks for all constructive criticism and positive comments guys. really appreciate it. i'm very excited to see it in the featured gallery, thanks logopond :)

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pnautilus Aug. 03 '07

Distill the concept a little further. *Try making the %22negative%22 lettering more powerful by taking away the competing elements. Remove the flower and the bows, simplifying the girl. To distill the name, follow %22smith%22 with %22design%22 in the same scripted font. Take away the %22girls clothing%22 and see if the mark now makes it apparent what the company does.

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darrel Aug. 03 '07

Lots to like about this.**However, one flaw is that 'design' is the emphasis here, when it seems to me that 'smith' really should be the focus. It's not just design, it's SMITH design.**It might warrant putting SMITH in text above DESIGN, but leave it also embroidered. You'd essentially have 2 elements that could be used interchangeably together or separately as the logo.**I also agree that the light elements (flower and bows) might be unnecessary.**I also like pnautilus idea...put 'design' in the same scripted typeface and connected to the 'smith' but reversed out. That might tie everything together nicely.**

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ahab Aug. 03 '07

Very cute...good clean design.**Good comments everyone.

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firebrand Aug. 04 '07

I agree, once these ideas are implemented it will look the business.

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OrangeSliceDesign Aug. 05 '07

Very nice. Colors are great. Love it.

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OrangeSliceDesign Aug. 05 '07

By the way, this site is great! Thanks for telling me about it.

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rachelg Aug. 26 '07

The color scheme is excellent :) I'm a photographer of ten plus years and something is bugging me about the silhouette. I'm probably the only person that is bothered by this so I don't think its that important, maybe.. but the silhouettes pose because of its simplicity appears backwards LOL If you flip it, you may see what I see. If you leave it as is, I'd take the bows out. :) You could almost take the script that you have Smith in, and just make the silhouette an outline rather than a full silhouette. Meaning as the word Smith ends, the h could start the open outline of the silhouette. Design and Girls Clothing would fit in that type beneath the word Smith.

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richaus Mar. 05 '08

I actually think this design is lacking a great deal. Smith almost gets lost in the dress and the wording*Design %26 Girls Clothing seem bland. They feel like they were just kind of thrown on there next to a pretty good illustration of a girl. Like you almost just picked a sans serif and laid it down.

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