Patricia Valente

by tvila • Uploaded: Aug. 29 '07

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Description: Personal logo from Patrícia Valente, astrologer.
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qmanning Aug. 29 '07

I like this mark a whole lot, but not a big fant of the type treatment. Seems almost like an afterthought. I Like the bounding box very much, however, and would just say the typography needs some character :) **Right off the bat, I could see playing with the dot in the i and the star concept you've got going on in the object the bird is holding.

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Darrel Aug. 29 '07

I like it a lot. I'd probably suggest the opposite of qmanning...I think the type is nice, not boring and not competing with the mark either. Instead I'd probably suggest removing the border.**So, there you go...two completely opposite critiques. That probably means your mark is fine as is. %3Bo)

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tdf Aug. 30 '07

Tie breaker! I would also remove the box...

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