the Unrefined Olive

by thesmallmonsters • Uploaded: Sep. 24 '12

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Description: Logo (design in process) for an olive oil and balsamic vinegar tasting bar in the Glebe district of Ottawa, Ontario.
Status: Work in progress
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Tags: drop drip oil Olive
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Hayes Image Sep. 24 '12

I quite like this, it's got a well established feel to it & the tone is really nice. My critique would be that there are few niggly typographic spots; such as the space between H & E in 'the' looks like TH E, the R & V seem too wide and the T & F look a tad short.

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THEArtistT Sep. 24 '12

LOVE the font, btw. I don't have issues with heights and widths, but the kerning does need a little tweaking.

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thesmallmonsters Oct. 02 '12

Thank you for the comments. This is why I like this site!

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