sultan

by tass • Uploaded: Jul. 14 '10

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Add to Pad (In 1 Pad )

Description: work in progress. any suggestion on how can i improve it?
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oski Jul. 15 '10

I like where this is heading to! I think mark need some tweaks maybe is just to bold. For the type I suggest to get rid top left part of %22a%22 and make straight connection with %22T%22 maybe you can use same bold connection as you have between %22s%22 and %22u%22.

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tass Jul. 15 '10

I think you've got a good point about the a, don't know why i didn't think before, thanks for the tip, i will try that and re-upload it, thank you!

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tass Jul. 15 '10

Type updated. Better now?

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oski Jul. 15 '10

Top is better bud to me %22a%22 is now quite to close to stem of the %22T%22. I know you tried match spacing as with %22su%22.

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tass Jul. 15 '10

yep, got me on that one. i have tried a few variations, but wasn't happy with them. should i use %22ul%22/%22an%22 spacing maybe? i'll give it a try. thanks again.

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