by sparksmemphis • Uploaded: Jun. 17 '07
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Logo for a new graphic design, web design and SEO company.
theres 3 versions up. a comment on the one you prefer would be much appreciated
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I guess I prefer this one. The green is perfect. It reminds me of bamboo. In my opinion, for this logo to stay in the minds of people, you should do something with the cuteness of the panda bear. This one is maybe too serious. The bear does not have enough expression. Or his mouth is a little weird. I don't know.**It's not that I find it a bad logo, so I hope you are not offended. I was attracted to it, but this is what I missed.
ReplyMy issue with all 3 logos you posted is that it seems like you're trying to force the Panda's face into your logo layouts. It just doesn't feel natural coming off of the %22P%22 the way you have it. I also think your type needs some work. The kerning is off and the bottom type is way too small. The bamboo shoot for the %22I%22 also isn't working. And I agree with Yglo about the Panda's expression. Please keep in mind, I'm not trying to bash you or your logos, just making a professional observation.
Replyi appreciate the crits. logo making isnt my strongest area of %22expertise%22 bc im not that great with type. i love beautiful well thought type but i get very impatient when making my own work. %0D*these are still a work in progress so the crits help.%0D*this one is also my fav of the 3 but the bottom type has been bothering me. i was attempting to in a way make the %22P%22 seem like the pandas other eye but couldnt get it to work just right. %0D*as far as the pandas face, i was trying to make it more agressive than cute which is manly illustrated in the eyebrow. but yeah its a little forced and doesnt engrave itself in your mind at the moment. i think im almost there though. thanks again for the crits. it helps!
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