Wijaya

by shigeoarai • Uploaded: Feb. 18 '10

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Description: Wijaya Nursery
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kathariney Feb. 18 '10

personally, I think you can lose that sliver of colour outside the frame. that style just seems to be contradicting with the elegant style you have with the rest of the mark... in this scale, the two little flowers seems to be veyr blurry, I'd probably just drop them. I think if you play around with the colour, you probably can do the leaves and W without outline. Right now, the W seems to be blending in a bit much. Think it can benefit from a darker fill.

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