Polar Bear Field Hockey Tours
by shiftmedia • Uploaded: Jun. 23 '08
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Field hockey development camp that offers tours to tournaments all over the North America, Asia and Europe.
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Bad illustration and bad typo.
Replythanks for the great feedback... maybe you should elaborate a little, or tell me how you really feel.
ReplyThe illustration is conceptually devoid of character, emotion and movement. It's poorly executed as well with no artistic technique to speak of. It's also dingy instead of the crisp white associated with polar bears. The typography feels very staid. Kerning and word spacing is rough. Font choice is boring. The baseline, horizontal line and tag line are pinched and fighting with each other.
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