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by ricardobarroz • Uploaded: Sep. 27 '12

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Description: FeedBack Please! Consulting Services company
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Hayes Image Sep. 27 '12

Feedback - This one is the best of the 3, I see that you're settled with the type, I wouldn't have kerned it so tightly (but that's just a personal preference). In terms of critique I think there needs to a little more consistency with the triangular shapes that make up the mark i.e The yellow/orange one is gigantic in comparison to the blue ones.

Also in terms of colour, the blue & red at the bottom contrast each other & define the two different shapes, where as the top blue & green don't have that same definition. Hope this helps.

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ricardobarroz Sep. 27 '12

Very thanks @hayes! i'll work a bit more! :)

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ClimaxDesigns Sep. 28 '12

that r is bugging me, i jsut doesnt feel right to me

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ricardobarroz Oct. 03 '12

...the client likes this typography...

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dotflo Oct. 04 '12

like the direction of the mark, Hayes has a very solid observation :)

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