Muscle Machine

by retailengine • Uploaded: Jun. 15 '10

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clarmont Jun. 19 '10

did you want a critique on this?

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clarmont Jun. 19 '10

I'm new to this, so I think the green icon means comments, so here she goes:**I like the idea of this logo. I did one similar but different, I like the contrast you did on your better, mine looks a little plain after looking at yours.**I just find the guy looks like a mutant or some sort of freaky dude.**Also the colors need work, I would try making the orange bigger and adding a copy of %22Muscle Machine%22 in black under the white and offset it. Also I think spacing out the leading in %22Fitness Center%22 would help especially if this logo goes any small then what it is now. Great font choices! Great idea.**

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