CBF1

by red • Uploaded: Feb. 09 '10

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Description: Logo concept for my church.
Status: Unused proposal
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Tags: line art family church
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Chad Sanderson Feb. 09 '10

This one is my favorite of the set. I would pull the type away from the icon a bit. And I'm not entirely sold on the positioning of the text. How would it look if you removed the extra family member then positioned the text directly beneath?

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libran005 Feb. 09 '10

Lovely work...very neat illustration...!!

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red Feb. 09 '10

Thanks guys.**@Chad - I'm guessing you're referring to the person on the right? I'll mess with it and repost.

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logoboom Feb. 09 '10

very nice mark but the layout with the text is baffling to me. I can find no rhyme or reason.

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red Feb. 09 '10

@logoboom - I really respect your crit. Is it the fact that it's all left justified? Or that the name is so long. Or do you see kern/lead issues? This is my favorite design out of the 3 so I want to nail it. Thanks for any suggestions.

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Chad Sanderson Feb. 09 '10

I'm pretty sure he's saying that there's no reason for the text to be shifted to the left like that. I feel the same way. There's no sense of alignment, or balance. It looks like someone used tab on the icon then started another paragraph.

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jcubic Dec. 11 '10

I like the cross and that blue fill is not inside the border.

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