Back Roads & Beaches
by rdqlus • Uploaded: Mar. 09 '09
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This logo was for an outdoor nature and recreation area in Lorain Co. Ohio that offers biking, hiking and beach-front water recreation all in the county radius south of Lake Erie.
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I really like this. I can see how you have to have the B mark so large because of the detail, but it is too much for text below. I don't like the fancy ampersand, either, and the open space around it does not match the open space between BACK and ROADS. Reads as BACK then ROADS%26BEACHES. Shrink the main mark 75%25, find a more consistent ampersand for the text below, fix the spacing between words and reupload. I floated this because the changes I suggest don't change your concept or the execution of the main mark. I really love it.
ReplyThank you. Unfortunately for the changes you suggested it's too late. But I can see logic and merit in exactly what you said. You insights %26 time are very much appreciated.
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