promissio 4

by priby • Uploaded: Aug. 23 '07

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Description: with some improvements, let's see which one you like better. the line below the logo shows up on the stationery: business card, letter, and compliment card.
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bigjerk Aug. 23 '07

I'd try modifying the p in promisio to be more like the one in the mark...so the bottom of th counter and the stem meet perpendicular....otherwise pretty good....

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priby Aug. 23 '07

thnx, i've tried that and i thought that it spoiled the rythm of the characters, that's why i've used this way.*and what do you think about the full futura version (promissio 3)? which one's better?

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DigitalCool Aug. 23 '07

The line below the logo is irritating. The rest is great.

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ghorsman Aug. 24 '07

I think the line underneath adds a little frivolity. Overall, it's light and fun. Me likey.

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Thomas Aug. 27 '07

Nice improvement!

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