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This has potential. I feel this needs some simplifying. Perhaps take away all the strokes off everything. Make it 2-3 colours only with no gradients. Maybe the dark red, white and the light grey, it has potential with a little simplifying and a bit more space around it.

Hi,*Thx Cerise for your comment,*I simplify the logo...*What's can i design to illutrate the %22business signs%22 job ?*Thx pop

Ok... I think the font is a bit like %22impact%22 which in my opinion isn't a nice font. Do you have another font like futura medium not condensed though. Also the star symbol you had before you should reduce it down to a fifth of the size and place it above the %22a%22 make it red also. Also with the symbol it needs refinement so that the edges are sharp and even. I would take away the light blue background and take the thin stroke off the text. The text colour is fine. Hang in there it can be fixed.

not condensed font and the stroke is still on the edges of the text, otherwise better

I would get rid of the light blue

But thank you for your patience, sorry there are things that I did not understand the first time because of my English.*I think I have everything corrected?*If you can write that sentence differently than I can be misunderstood : %22the stroke is still on the edges of the text%22 ?*Thank you

What I mean by stroke is ,%22No outline on the font%22 or %22No stroke on the font%22 make sure there is no outline on the text. This looks a lot better, perhaps reduce the size of the word adcom by 2 point sizes and kern the word %22adcom%22 to -45 if you're using Illustrator and make it optical instead of auto for %22letter spacing%22 or %22kerning%22 which is to the left of kerning in Illustrator.%0D*%0D*We're nearly there

And have more space around the whole logo when cropping for logopond, should be about 3/4 smaller with more white space.

Sun - South of France ooops just read that. Perhaps change the red to a bright red or orange.