the golf space

by pixelbatch • Uploaded: Jul. 06 '10

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Description: I tried to incorporate both "golf" and "space" into this logo. I created a green to represent the word golf, and used the space around the golf ball (by bounding it off with the ball and the side of the letters "g" and "l" to create a green "o") to represent, well, the word space. Looking for some constructive criticism!
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mattjamestaylor Jul. 06 '10

Perhaps you could use a hole instead of a ball because it's more like a 'space' to be filled? And maybe the 'the' could be smaller so 'golf space' stands out more? Just a thought, I like the idea. :)

pixelbatch Jul. 06 '10

@mattjamestaylor thanks! I'll try the idea out

yelds Jul. 06 '10

i might suggest using the ball as 'o' and the flag as an 'l' or 'f'

pixelbatch Jul. 06 '10

@yelds thanks for your suggestion. at first I thought that it may be overkill, but making the %22l%22 a flag actually made the logo look better and helped border the %22o%22 even more effectively. all comments are extremely valuable especially since I just started my journey with logo design :)