La Pomme
by patrickmacomber • Uploaded: May. 21 '10
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Designed at 1 Trick Pony in sunny South Jersey
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Really digging the mark! Would probaby benefit from a less cluttered presentation though...
ReplyThe problem here is the background is bolder than the foreground. Lighten/thin the background out. Keep the head of the snake bolder then thin towards tail. Two reasons, what I've already stated about the background overwelming the foreground, and, it being a snake forming an apple is not readily apparent I do not think. I'm thinking now you should bold up the font a bit and position it below your filigreed, snake apple.
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