alarm

by palmer_jacee • Uploaded: Dec. 12 '11

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GRJustice2 Dec. 12 '11

I love the art work that you did for your flames and the play on words that you did with your logo, but I do think that it is a little busy and would be hard to put on any type of merchandise that is small. You seem to be going in a good direction I would try looking at changing it some so it's not so busy.

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sjustice.bear Dec. 12 '11

I wonder about you using all the colors. Also the numbers on the clock are small and i wonder if you would get dot gain. Also with the lines that show the vibrate of the alarm you may loose.

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amethyst Dec. 12 '11

This would look really cool if you distressed it a bit. I have some vector elements if you want to borrow them.

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janicedickey1 Dec. 14 '11

I like it but it needs something else.

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