I'm not sure I get the concept aside from trying to emulate the EU flag. there is a lot going on overall. Try to streamline it a bit not only in color, but in form as well. Also, the typography is too close to the mark and it just doesn't quite feel right...maybe is the upper lower case - my eye goes immediately to the 'l'
Yeah, the mark is too big for the text. I do like the colorfulness, but maybe having the word %22logos%22 in different colors is too much. It's hard to say anything more not knowing what you were trying to achieve.
hi guys...**first of all thanks for your time..**..cause its an logo design company.. i wanted to create something with a pencil..(* The pencil is mightier than the mouse -- Mike Erickson - logomotive) :)**so i started working on the pencil ..and got the idea to use it in the five points of the star.. which is an European symbol// i have also used different colored lines in a circular pattern just to show the different styles the designers can come up with..**i just wanted to check if the people can make out the whole idea behind it.. but from the feedback i think i need to do some* changes..*i am so happy that you guys spared some time off and gave your valuable feedback ..**Regards
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Interesting approach. It looks good!
ReplyI'm not sure I get the concept aside from trying to emulate the EU flag. there is a lot going on overall. Try to streamline it a bit not only in color, but in form as well. Also, the typography is too close to the mark and it just doesn't quite feel right...maybe is the upper lower case - my eye goes immediately to the 'l'
ReplyYeah, the mark is too big for the text. I do like the colorfulness, but maybe having the word %22logos%22 in different colors is too much. It's hard to say anything more not knowing what you were trying to achieve.
Replyhi guys...**first of all thanks for your time..**..cause its an logo design company.. i wanted to create something with a pencil..(* The pencil is mightier than the mouse -- Mike Erickson - logomotive) :)**so i started working on the pencil ..and got the idea to use it in the five points of the star.. which is an European symbol// i have also used different colored lines in a circular pattern just to show the different styles the designers can come up with..**i just wanted to check if the people can make out the whole idea behind it.. but from the feedback i think i need to do some* changes..*i am so happy that you guys spared some time off and gave your valuable feedback ..**Regards
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