Pipa

by nissinmiojo • Uploaded: Jan. 29 '12

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Description: Pipa Estúdio
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nissinmiojo Jan. 30 '12

c'mon people! i'm really seeking some critiques (good or not). i'm stucked on this. some people liked, some people not. and about you?

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Hayes Image Jan. 30 '12

I like the kite icon, not a big fan of your typeface choice. I wonder if the kite needs to be as big in comparison to the type. I think the typeface choice for the tagline is fine, but I'd increase it a weight, as it is hard to see as is. Hope this helps.

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nissinmiojo Jan. 31 '12

Thanks Hayes! I'll try this. I already made some modifications over its typeface, and now I'm trying to make the bubbles a little soft. I'll post a updated version soon. Thanks for your opinion!

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hanuman shakti Dec. 05 '12

I do love your tree work dude, this one is fine and just like hayes said...I don\'t quite agree on the typo that you have chosen! :)

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nissinmiojo Dec. 05 '12

hi hanuman! thanks again! we have chosen another option in the end, so I left this one behind. curiously, the chosen version has the same type of this one haha!

You can see the approved version here: http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/170146

See ya!

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