the bird land

by ndmgfx • Uploaded: Oct. 24 '08

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Description: a store for everything that has to do with birds
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Type08 Oct. 24 '08

Not sure about name positioning, but I like the touch here very much... Touch-much... TM? ?!?!? :)

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KGB Oct. 24 '08

the mark is very nice. the type seems a bit cramped compared to the free-spiritedness of the bird. Track the type out a bit and soften the blue of the type and you have something really nice here.

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ndmgfx Oct. 24 '08

thx guys for the comments ill try something out for the font,

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gyui Oct. 24 '08

I really like it a lot, but the white glow is really washing out your beautiful mark. Maybe soften it up?

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THEArtistT Feb. 26 '09

the word 'bird' falls away too much because of the color. use a bit stronger green from the bird image. take out the white spot in the bird image. that white in the gradient takes overshadows the great shapes.

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tass Jul. 06 '09

Great symbol, very nice mark!

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