Nice! I'd make the type just a tad more squatty. Just scale it vertically a bit. *The hole between LS is giving me some grief. Maybe the top curve can be exaggerated to fill in the L negative space rather than the bottom curve being so big. This would help with my other issue. It doesn't have a strong foundation. Feels like the PALS is hanging rather than supporting. A nice swooshy underscore in the same style as the type would ground it for me. My two cents!
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nice feel ... like your style !
ReplyWow! Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback. Designing type is a challenge.
ReplyNice! I'd make the type just a tad more squatty. Just scale it vertically a bit. *The hole between LS is giving me some grief. Maybe the top curve can be exaggerated to fill in the L negative space rather than the bottom curve being so big. This would help with my other issue. It doesn't have a strong foundation. Feels like the PALS is hanging rather than supporting. A nice swooshy underscore in the same style as the type would ground it for me. My two cents!
ReplyLovely-lovely picture!
ReplyThanks everyone - feels good to switch the status to client work!
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