Bradford Family Farm

by mollybermea • Uploaded: Jan. 13 '09

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Description: Second copy. revisions from the client. Sort of been a little frustrating on this process. Comments?
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ElleRae Feb. 07 '09

I think the word FARM gets lost at the bottom, as does the slogan at the top. When reduced to business card size all the viewer will see is %22Bradford Family%22, which, if that's what the client wants to see, is great. But they may want to consider having the entire words, %22Bradford Family Farm%22 under the logo and then the %22Growing...%22 under that. That way they can all be legible when smaller and the %22Growing...%22 can be removed on smaller items where it would become intelligible. The logo itself is really nice though, great shape. I understand how difficult clients can be when you make suggestions, show it to them on the various stationery they'll be using - at the correct size for the stationery - and show how the wording can get lost in translation.

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