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This one seems like it's trying a bit too hard to me. I'd definitely work with refining the type underneath if nothing else, seems a bit slapped on.
thanks for the comments! this is still under development, so thanks for the help! i think both of you are right.
Try losing that circle too and concentrate on that %22F.%22 Any reason it's larger than the rest of the letters? This has some potential though. Keep working it! Also, try a lime green with that chocolate brown. It could add more legibility.
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This one seems like it's trying a bit too hard to me. I'd definitely work with refining the type underneath if nothing else, seems a bit slapped on.
Replythanks for the comments! this is still under development, so thanks for the help! i think both of you are right.
ReplyTry losing that circle too and concentrate on that %22F.%22 Any reason it's larger than the rest of the letters? This has some potential though. Keep working it! Also, try a lime green with that chocolate brown. It could add more legibility.
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