by mbilal • Uploaded: Nov. 07 '13
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Pottery Paradise
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I like the vase, but that is all. Not liking the color, fonts, layout, or the curve under the vase. Junk everything and tweak the vase. I would take that pointy part off the shadow and round it down to look a little like a P, and make sure the vase is all one color. I would recommend going with a bronzie green, terracotta red, or mushroom brown instead of the too bright red/black scheme you have. Then find a single font for the name. Something easy to read. And position it below at a smaller size in a darker hue of the color you use for the vase.
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