Pottery Paradise

by mbilal • Uploaded: Nov. 07 '13


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Description: Pottery Paradise
Status: Work in progress
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Tags: paradise pottery

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THEArtistT Nov. 11 '13

I like the vase, but that is all. Not liking the color, fonts, layout, or the curve under the vase. Junk everything and tweak the vase. I would take that pointy part off the shadow and round it down to look a little like a P, and make sure the vase is all one color. I would recommend going with a bronzie green, terracotta red, or mushroom brown instead of the too bright red/black scheme you have. Then find a single font for the name. Something easy to read. And position it below at a smaller size in a darker hue of the color you use for the vase.


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