Mar. 19 '08
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Women's online magazine. Made for OrangeLabel.ru
I like this. Two things:*1. The ampersand could be much more organic like your flourish.*2. Does it need a color break coming off of the e in life to triangulate the 2nd color?
The colour combination works really well here also.
yes, love the color
I love this. The color combo is good. The transition between the colors at the end of 'e' in Love and at the beginning of the ampersand can be much more subtler like a gradient than an abrupt change in color.
Agree with all that gthobbs said. The ampersand could be a bit more organic to match the vine, and maybe a small gradient so the tail on the e isn't such a dramatic transition?
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