The Fruits of Our Labor

by mavric • Uploaded: Apr. 26 '10

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m1sternoname May. 31 '10

I like this, has some kind of tragic and therefor cynical feel to it. The lower line may be too small though.

theartistt May. 31 '10

Hmm. I really like it but feel there is something a bit awkward about it. Can't put my finger on it. Too much black space between the top of the tree and the top edge of the black? That came to me first. Course awkward could be good? The bottom line cannot be read at this size. Leave it off or separate it and add it in black under the entire mark a few point sizes smaller than OF OUR LABOR. I personally feel slogans and such shouldn't even be made a part of the integral logo design. That gives the client the freedom to change it, move it or drop it depending on the output size and media.

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