grandma's day care

by mallen58 • Uploaded: Nov. 06 '12

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Description: halo spa color
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vision design and graphics Nov. 12 '12

mallen58,
I don\'t know if I should like this logo or think of it as a perversion. I had to be so blunt/bold but when it comes to logo design you have to look at the logo/design from all viewpoints. The overall logo has a light feeling (a spa logo should be light) but the font that \"a heavenly haven\" is in just doesn\'t work with the logo. I feel that you have two many things going on with the logo (too many elements). The Halo and the mountains (hills). There is also too much of a division within the logo.

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AMart77 Nov. 14 '12

i like the three different versions of your design. if it was me i would go with the halo and type it seems more clean and less complicated.

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williamtdow Nov. 14 '12

I really like your second draft in color. The words Halo Spas covered by the halo is much simpler. I would like to suggest applying a possible outline to the yellow halo. A heavier stroke on one side and a lighter stroke on the other.

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