coony

by lumo • Uploaded: Sep. 29 '10

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Description: wip...children's clothing. not quite settled on colors yet, but the idea is there.
Status: Work in progress
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nickhood Sep. 29 '10

Great work! I like it a lot. Perhaps a little more space between the whiskers or a smaller stroke. maybe have them fan outward a bit. Something about them is bothersome. I think its 99%25 there.

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lumo Sep. 30 '10

thanks nickhood. updated.

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clairec Oct. 03 '10

Awesome mark! Just one thing in the type, the y seems too close to the n in comparison with the other letters. Great feel overall %26 well suited to the subject

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raja Oct. 03 '10

This is well drawn, I love the horizontal break. In terms of colour, have you tried contrasting the eye area with the rest?...raccoons are best known for their black eyes.**I think you can get more playful and attentive with the type

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raja Oct. 03 '10

I see that you have updated this -- looks more coony now :D A great refinement.

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lumo Oct. 04 '10

Thanks clairec and raja for the comments. Updated with mask and customized the type. **Are the colours suitable for the job here?

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raja Oct. 04 '10

I'd go with bigger type -- what age group of kids is this targeting?

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lumo Oct. 04 '10

Currently the type is aligned with the 'mask' as you can see. Thinking of age 3-8 ish. around there.

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thomas Oct. 05 '10

As usual, nice logo James. Catchy and clean, I like it.

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lumo Oct. 17 '10

thanks nickhood and logoses

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