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I love this mark, the only thing is the A and r is a bit difficult to read. Otherwise this is a beautiful mark. Maybe add a tiny bit more negative space inside the fork too, it'll help define it a bit more.

The noodle (?) makes a C before a so that it reads 'Carcobaleno'! The noodle can be attached to the serif of 'a', instead. Just a thought!

thanks. It's first draw and comments are very helpful.

very nice sign, it's true that some can read Carcobaleno but i have no idea how it could be made more readable

Nice work, but It's C again... Hmm ::::: Try to use capital A and lenghten middle stroke of an %22A%22 to connect with spaghetti, but keep this big curve and push it a little bit down, maybe... Don't loose this flow! Hope you understand... ? **--A**

Or maybe the capital A has a long descender on the left that doubles back? Otherwise, good work, and good luck!

Yes man, everything is fine now... Readable and smooth, very nice logotype ! *:)

Perfect! Kudos, liquor.

This is nit picky... Love the improvements, but the blue lines on the far left of the spaghetti are unlike any other overlapping techniques you've used elsewhere.... I'd either just take the split out or the two curlies all together.