In this revision I enlarged the center graphic element by 5%25, shortened it to compliment the X height of the primary text and moved it to nest better with the slope of the sides. The letters are kerned and now the A is centered with the graphic, the O %26 Y are tighter and the U isn't as isolated as it was. I had to shorten the last segment on the right side of the graphic a tiny bit to fudge the centering.
Looks tighter. The center image at the top still seems off to me (although better than before), I think it is just stylistically too different.**Btw, you rock. Just wanted you to know that.
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In this revision I enlarged the center graphic element by 5%25, shortened it to compliment the X height of the primary text and moved it to nest better with the slope of the sides. The letters are kerned and now the A is centered with the graphic, the O %26 Y are tighter and the U isn't as isolated as it was. I had to shorten the last segment on the right side of the graphic a tiny bit to fudge the centering.
ReplyLooks tighter. The center image at the top still seems off to me (although better than before), I think it is just stylistically too different.**Btw, you rock. Just wanted you to know that.
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