elementum

by lgmatt86 • Uploaded: Nov. 02 '10

3152759586bcb45c388d85adffbfe2b1.png

Add to Pad (In 0 Pad s )

Description: This is my brain dump assignment for a web design company. I want to out alot of emphasis of the "E" and think i will drop the "u" and the "m" and just go with element.
Status: Student work
Viewed: 575
Share:  

Lets Discuss

MaHOSkey Nov. 02 '10

You have come a long way from the TEXT you have been using. I don't know about the E

Reply
gil.corcuera Nov. 02 '10

The neon is pretty hard on the eyes. The coding design has to be a little bit more bolder or change the font.

Reply
J_Ben_A Nov. 02 '10

I feel your E needs some work and dont think the colors clash

Reply
J_Ben_A Nov. 02 '10

I feel your E needs some work and think the colors clash

Reply
bullmastiff07 Nov. 02 '10

I agree with Gil, the neon is kinda ruff on the eyes. I don't think it would hurt to go with a bolder font on the coding and design, maybe do the %22E's%22 in the same color and the big E needs some work as well.

Reply
vision design and graphics Nov. 03 '10

I feel that with some work the %22E%22 and the %22red star%22 could be a logo in and of its self. I also wonder if the %22E%22 needs to be uppercase? Why not use just (and only) a lower case %22e%22 that might fit your type better (nice font on the %22lementum%22). This logo has some potential an I would like to see you rework this.

Reply

Please login/signup to make a comment, registration is easy