Shout

by lboi • Uploaded: Jul. 09 '09

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Description: A logo playing on the word "shout"
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theartistt Jul. 10 '09

at first it is not obvious that is an open mouth. I mean I know it is supposed to be because of the name, but there is an instants confusion at first. I think you should ditch the o altogether and just make it a mouth (add lips is all you have to do). I think that would translate better.

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gyui Jul. 10 '09

%5Eagree, the thickness of the %22O%22 throws things off. initially looked like a bat. you can have elements come out of the %22O%22, like the tongue maybe. the 3 dash lines seem either not enough or unnecessary.

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lboi Jul. 10 '09

yeah .. i'll work on this one, i had changed the overall weight of the type, but feels off.

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lboi Jul. 10 '09

Updated .. this feels much better and has stopped bothering me now ..lol

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knightscreative Jul. 10 '09

Very cool! The earlier version took me a minute to recognize the mouth. This one is very clear. :)

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JohnM Jul. 10 '09

exactly the kind of font i was thinkin about!!! looks cool sneh! lot of character...

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lboi Jul. 10 '09

Thanks JT and John .. yeah it has stopped bugging me now lol.

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gyui Jul. 10 '09

%5EYes! mucho mucho mucho better!

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lboi Jul. 11 '09

Thanks guys!! :D

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andreiu Jul. 17 '09

this is very cool! :D

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lboi Jul. 17 '09

Thanks andreiu!

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tass Aug. 01 '09

Nice and clear.

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lboi Aug. 04 '09

Thanks tass :-)

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