Vision Health and Fitness

by jrt1223 • Uploaded: Aug. 22 '07

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sdijock Aug. 23 '07

jrt - I'm really liking the modern feel and simplicity of this logo. I do have a couple of suggestions though. I would make the background behind the type a solid black as I think most people associate lighthouse beams with night/darkness. I would then fill in your lime green rays with black so just the yellow beams are there. Finally, I would make the first %22I%22 in %22VISION%22 your lighthouse because the second %22I%22 isn't quite in the middle of the logo and it looks off - I keep wanting to center it and I can't because of the letter spacing. So if you move it to the first %22I%22 it would look more intentional.

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jrt1223 Aug. 23 '07

thank you, yeah that was bothering me as well. As far as the black goes I completely agree, it's just a matter of getting the client to agree. I'll have to explore your suggestions. Thanks again for the critics.

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