by jonathadapper • Uploaded: Nov. 12 '09
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The logo is for a Business Social Web, like a Twitter for B2B business. The name "Craw" is an onomatopoeia of the Eagle, the symbol of business. I hope you like!
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I think it's well executed but I'm not sure about the idea... Business Social... they kinda clash with each other... Business isn't really something I consider a Social activity but perhaps that's just my opinion... *Also it feels like it's a Twitter wannabe... trying to imitate an original idea... But that's more about the concept, as I said I like the execution which is very balanced and pleasing. Good work!**
ReplyThe success of the twitter logo bird is due to the fact that it's a simple blue bird, therefor you can make it small. The bald eagle is a large bird and trying to simplify and decrease it's size is just not working for me. Right now it's on the border of looking like a decapitated bald eagle head flying through the air. Also, do you really want a bird as it's mascot? Twitter has already established the bird and it's recognizable as such. I would consider strongly that you choose a different animal to differentiate between the two companies.
ReplyThe eagle is neither an icon nor an illustration. It's in between. Be decisive: either blow it out or strip it down.**I would explore ways of meshing 'social' and 'business', since that's the core of your concept.
ReplyThank you for the critiques. This work is for a school work who we create a kinf of %22extension%22 of the Twitter, but special, because the interface is for business. Because it that i use the same identity of the twitter... %0D*Thanks for the critiques.
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