BW v1

by jmutton • Uploaded: Aug. 25 '10

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Description: Just quickly thrown this together to get some opinions.This is for a friend with the initials BW. Its for his business cards. Can you guess what he does?
Status: Work in progress
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Tags: Dentist W B BW
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trueedge2097 Aug. 25 '10

Can't guess what he does. Sorry. Well, it's a good logo. The only thing I see is that the B isn't immediately obvious. I had to look to see it. It's a great design, though. Keep working at it.

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jmutton Aug. 25 '10

His first initial 'B' is not as important as the 'W'. Most would be calling him by his last name. I'll rework into this and see if I can make his profession more clear. Thanks for taking the time to comment :-)

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trueedge2097 Aug. 25 '10

I look forward to seeing the rework. If his first initial isn't that important (because people usually call him by his last name), then I'd say it's all right. I can't say I've met very many people like that. It's interesting. Certainly, you want to make the logo (or anagram or whatever) relevant to that individual. Good job. I look forward to more.

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adambomb Aug. 25 '10

What's the significance of the 2 short lines in the middle of the W?

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jmutton Aug. 25 '10

Well I was going for dentist i.e. a brace. I'm now currently reworking it as his profession is pretty lost in it.

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mfrank Aug. 25 '10

I saw the braces and teeth. But is he an orthodontist or dentist? Maybe make the white space for the teeth..more shaped like teeth? I like this version over the toothbrush one...if it fits the profession.

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adambomb Aug. 25 '10

If he's an orthodontist this version certainly makes sense, but I think it could use a bit of tweaking so that it registers as teeth on first glance. If that means getting rid of the B, that's probably not a big deal. I'm hardly seeing the B as it is.**I do think that with some honing, this could be pretty sweet.***

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jmutton Aug. 26 '10

Just spoke with him this morning and he is infact a dentist not an orthodontist. So this probably is not the best solution for him. However his girlfriend does reconstructive dentisty so maybe I can tweak it for her. Thanks for taking the time to write some comments for me :)

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