Park Lawn Development

by ijoshua • Uploaded: Jun. 26 '07

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Description: This is a non-existing architecture firm focused on "green building."
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tjclarey Jun. 26 '07

This is amazing...very cool concept!

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kult house Jun. 26 '07

I like it, but I can't help but get this strange ominous feeling from the logo. The windows look somewhat foreboding and I feel like the building extends underground in some suspicious sort of way.

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vishalv Jun. 26 '07

hey Joshua... excellent illustration and a great concept! very well done!

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reversi Jun. 27 '07

Hi ijoshua,%0D*i think yours is a grat logo, simple and clear.%0D*%0D*Unfortunately it worries me a bit, because i feel the building is collapsing%3B obviously this feeling comes from the sad 9/11 happenings and images on TV.. If all that mess wouldn't have happened, i'm sure your concept was perfect.%0D*%0D*Anyway great job!%0D*Simone

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Craven91 Jun. 27 '07

I'm seeing a cheese grater and a corn stalk, but I can understand what you're doing here.%0D*%0D*Is there any merit in maybe changing the perspective on the building? Maybe making it seems as if we're looking up at it?

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sdijock Jun. 27 '07

I think equating the building with 911 is a little harsh, but I do agree with what everyone is saying about the peeling of the building being seen as a negative image, nonetheless. **I really love the concept, but perhaps a single long leaf wrapping around and around to form the building would help to convey what you're thinking?

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logomotive Jun. 27 '07

You know, I think you can still maintain some of the pleasing qualities of this logo if you focus on the top and create a way to make it where it does not look like it's blown out up the middle. It caught my eye, but feel you need to go back to the drawing board on that part. Great other than the very top part.

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kult house Jun. 27 '07

Why don't you just illustrate another, smaller building sprouting out of the opening? Or a skyscraper point?

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ijoshua Jun. 28 '07

Great comments, thanks for the critique everyone.

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reversi Jun. 29 '07

Hi, what kult house said is a good idea. Doing so you'd grew the building like a flower.%0D*That's a positive thing and a positive think :)

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reversi Jun. 29 '07

sorry for my english..%0D*you'd grOw :)%0D*%0D*i need english lessons :D

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Thomas Jun. 29 '07

Very nice concept. You're very close to a great mark. May be I will try another suggestion. You could finish the building top like %22Chrysler buiding in NYC%22:http://www.eleves.ens.fr/home/jego/new_york/chryslerb.jpg and and/or antenna and use it to create a flower, a (palm) tree...

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