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I really like this. The mark lends itself well to the placement of 'photography' as the direction of the kid's shadows draw your eyes to the text.

It's nice. I personally would have made the silhouettes a little darker and blended out the shadows so that they are darker where they meet the silhouettes and fade out lighter as they stretch out. Admitedly, I'm also not sold on your font choices, especially for %22photography%22.

The mark and the colors are great. Have you tried center aligning the type? Clashmore makes a good point in regards to the tracking of 'photography'. You might want to tighten up the tracking on 'Cindy Yen' as well.

Feels odd that the kids are the same value as their shadow. But I can deal with that. Might be nicer if the kids snuggled down between the words. That's a huge gap there. That would leave the centering behind.

me gusta, pero cambiaria la tipografia, excelentes contornos!! saludos