design4haiti

by hsl • Uploaded: Feb. 14 '10

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Description: A logo I've made for a project I'm doing. I'm curious what people think about it.
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opwancanopie Feb. 14 '10

Good concept... badly executed.

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Creative Squall Feb. 14 '10

Definitely lose the drop shadow. Try a more geometric font to matche the style of the %22 %22 and %224%22. Cool idea. Keep working at it.

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hsl Feb. 15 '10

Thank you, I will do that.**And to opwancanopie.. That comment is useless.

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Chad Sanderson Feb. 15 '10

I would change the proportions on the 4 to match the proportions of the cross. Right now it looks more like a plus sign. Stylizing it wouldn't hurt either. This could be really cool if it was drawn in cursive, for example. **I would also get rid of the red/blue color scheme. Red and blue is very rarely a good scheme to go with, in any situation. And like Squall said, definitely match the font to the mark. **Also, place the text somewhere else. With the 4 sandwiched between the letters like that, it makes everything seem too tight. Let it breathe a little.

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hsl Feb. 16 '10

.Thank you so much for your time Chad it is highly appreciated. I've looked at it and done some changes. And uploaded a new version which I am a lot more satisfied with. **Actually looking at the old one now makes me sick. But I still don't really know if I'm satisfied though.**Maybe you can take a look at the new version?*http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/94469

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