Tiny Red Bus

by gynemeth78 • Uploaded: Jul. 24 '09 - Gallerized: Jul. '09

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cobaltcow Jul. 24 '09

very nice mark. just a few suggestions..**1. drop the outer glow from the bus - keep it nice and sharp*2. drop the curl from the R. At a glance I keep reading tiny REED bus.

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gyui Jul. 24 '09

%5Eagree with everyone cobaltcow said. also %22books%22 seems out of place with all the other playful elements going on.

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myco Jul. 24 '09

Adorable! I agree with cobalt cow's comments as well...

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cseven Jul. 24 '09

Love it. Ditto to cobaltcow's points.

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nexqunyx Jul. 25 '09

Yes I agree with the curl on the %22R%22. At quick glance one could mistakenly read it as %22Reed%22. Also %22books%22 looks really lost in the overall design. Needs tweaking but otherwise- SUPER!

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esotericsean Jul. 26 '09

Definitely agree. Keep it simple. No outer glow and too many curls.

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lboi Jul. 26 '09

I love it. It is perfect!!

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McGuire Design Aug. 01 '09

I love this one, keep it as is it looks great.

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Petro Sep. 06 '09

Egree with cobaltcow. But it looks very nice %3B-)

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