by gibara • Uploaded: Mar. 18 '10
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Hmm...cool illy mark but I see how you're struggling with balance. The frame helps but still seems off.
Replyfor balance maybe tilt the head/beak down? I quite like it as is, however.
ReplyI think with some refinement this could be a real classy mark. I just don't think it's quite right yet.
ReplyNot sure if it would work, but you could also try scaling the mark up a bit, center the body portion within the enclosure and let the beak break the enclosure a little bit. You might have to adjust the weight of the mark when doing this, but it could help the balance. Still, it's very nice.
ReplyTilting the beak would make it less like %22Toth%22 (mithology god in wich was inspired), maybe moving ir a little to the right, I don't know.*But you guys are right... I REALLY struggled with balance there, but since the project was aborted I left it that way. Even so I kinda like it.**Thanks for comments, everyone.
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